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A Ballad of Tomorrow by ~snakeeyesx:iconsnakeeyesx:



On the half birth of hope a seed was planted.

A seed of future, a seed of destiny.

Planted in a disturbed soul.

A loving soul, but one that has died.

Killed by starvation, the void of a tomorrow.

Killed by the complete lack of faith, no reason to walk on.

But still crying out, letting all hear it's story.

Very dangerous it is bringing back the dead.

A risk that could save or damn the soul for eternity.

If the seeds blooms healthy, natured by love, breathing with hope, then when the soul blooms,

Everything it touches will be refreshed, invigorated by the life living within it.

If the seed is grown with hate, then it will destroy, causing doom to enter all who near it.  

A spawning pit for all things bad, walking decay.

All in the hands of her, a child of hope.

Will she tend the seed she planted?

Or is it just an inconvenience, a extra step from the normal?

Does she not see what could be?

The joy that the seed would spawn, a joy that would give her renewed reason.

So blind, ignorent even such as a child of hope.

I cry for her, and those who she will damn...
©2004-2009 ~snakeeyesx
:iconsnakeeyesx:

Author's Comments

1st thing I've written in I dont even know how long, something has envoked some sort of feeling in me once more, 1st a feeling of hope and joy, then a feeling of dread and doom.

C and C welcome, tell me what you think.

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:iconsnakeeyesx:
This peice of shit should be deleted for the pain it has caused me, but I will leave it as a reminder to myself to never again do something when my mind in not 100 percent clear, anger, sarrow, they all blind your actions just as much as alcohol ever could or would.

I dedicate this to what will never be because I didnt allow it to become anything because I am a hasty peice of shit who doesnt deserve the air I breath.

Thast last line should be deleted because it will garenteed bring me more pain by my head is in the gutter at the moment so foolishly I will leave it up.

What a complete morron I am and will always be...

I cry for me, and all those in which I will damn.

--
"for he is everything and nothing,
hero and fool,
potent, helpless-
and with one world of truth or treachery
he will save or damn the Earth
because he is mad and sane,
cold and passionate,
lost and found."

-The Unbeliever
:iconsnakeeyesx:
Wow, that was truly a pathedic rant, plus I'm commenting on my own peice, says alot about my current state. Well my little pity party is over, I back to my normal old self, interesting I know.

Maybe if were lucky my next peice wont be such a load of horse shit.




T H E E N D

--
"for he is everything and nothing,
hero and fool,
potent, helpless-
and with one world of truth or treachery
he will save or damn the Earth
because he is mad and sane,
cold and passionate,
lost and found."

-The Unbeliever
:iconkoru:
derek stop fucking over your own work you know that that shit up there is real you just wont fucking admit it! Now i dont care if this reply with forever ruin our relationship.I dont care if you'll ever talk to me again just listen to what your soul is telling you. Its up to you to change..
:iconsnakeeyesx:
No offense but you have no clue what has happened, so please dont comment intill you have the whole story.

--
"for he is everything and nothing,
hero and fool,
potent, helpless-
and with one world of truth or treachery
he will save or damn the Earth
because he is mad and sane,
cold and passionate,
lost and found."

-The Unbeliever
:icontheloveofinsanity:
well, no one deserves the air they breathe. To believe we do makes us arrogant. However, knowing that we were given our lives, and the choice of living, that's what keeps me going. If I told myself that I am alone in a world which happened by chance, not by design, then I would have no reason to live for my life would hold no purpose. Then again, if there is a Greater Being, why would He leave us in pain and suffering? The answer isn't always clear, but if there was no suffering, where does compassion fit in? Living a life w/ hope for something which may be too unbelieveable for our minds to grasp is better then leading yourself into thinking that there is nothing or no one who truly cares for U and that the only choice is to live in a solitary depression.

Derek, Ur writing is some of the best I've ever seen. What do U like in this particular piece? ask yourself that.

As for me, I need to work on what I have so that I won't B kicking myself over it later. haha. Talk to U later.

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