She Lies
A victim of Death’s Refusal
Unwilling to submit her to rest
Curses her for her weakness
Until She learns her lesson
She cries,
hating life, beat by her father, cursed by her mother, raped by her boyfriend, she hides in her mind. She lives in endless sorrow, she wants it to end. She doesn’t want to cry anymore. So she brings cold sharp steel to her wrist, drains the life giving blood, and then jumps into a pit of endless water, cold as corpses.
She wakes,
up in a room but she can’t see, only hears, she hears her mother and farther crying for her. She regrets what she has done and wishes to live once again, for just one more chance. Death lets her wait, lets her learn, and lets her suffer. Years later death decides to give her a chance, he tells her to never let hope die and to live. With that she wakes from her coma.
She starts,
living happily, her family treats her well, her new boyfriend makes her happy. Then after awhile things start to go downhill, things start becoming the same and she falls into depression, dealing once again with self struggle. She ignores death warning; she lets the weakness consume her. She decides that death is the only way and gets a gun. With tears streaming down here face she sticks the tool of death deeply in her mouth, whispers a good bye and pulls the trigger…
She listens,
as Death tells her she has failed to heed his warning, wasted her chance. Her punishment would be worse then life and worse then twisted death; he would show her true suffering. She was to torment endlessly till the end of her days, stuck in a paralyzed body, but with a perfect mind, unable to ever sleep or take sanctuary in her mind. Death would make her learn.
She lies
A victim of Death’s Refusal
Unwilling to submit her to rest
Cursing her for her weakness
Until she learns her lesson.















Comments
But ignoring that its a most stunningly powerful work, and very impressive indeed my friend!
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"for he is everything and nothing,
hero and fool,
potent, helpless-
and with one world of truth or treachery
he will save or damn the Earth
because he is mad and sane,
cold and passionate,
lost and found."
-The Unbeliever
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Death makes angels of us all
& gives us wings
where we had shoulders
smooth as raven's
claws
-Jim Morrison
One of the most strong things I've read in these days.
You did well in describing... very emotionally done...
Keep it up! I'd love to read more from ya.
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I can only reflect as far as I can see and my vision is very blurry and I can not see.
Dirct. WwW.Noir.org
Friends no order!
She lies
A victim of Death’s Refusal
Unwilling to submit her to rest
Cursing her for her weakness
Until she learns her lesson.
such a power filled piece
brought a tear to the eye
congrats
has been a long while since i cried
to long
thank you
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Walking the Boulevard or broken dreams, lost in a mer de noms
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